TLC by Chrouya
Script:	 Magi 8 [TL][TS][Time][Edited]
Workraw: Magi08-RC

23 24
{\i1}Spirit of severity and decorum, I command you and your kin.{\i0}
{\i1}Make my powers your sustenance, and grant my will your great strength!{\i0}
{\i1}Spirit of severity and decorum, I command thee and thine kin.{\i0}
{\i1}Make my powers thy sustenance, and grant my will thy great strength!{\i0}
{if you like that kind of chanting}


140
Aladdin... Would you listen to what a friend of mine has to say first?{split?}
Aladdin... Would you listen to a story about a friend of mine first?{split?}
{It's not a that Kassim wants to say something, Alibaba wants to tell about Kassim.}

148
I'm the king of the mountain!
I'm the king of the hill!
{This is a game's name} 
{I notice instances of mountain being used in later lines too. Take heed}


154
I call it "tunnel killing!"
I call it "tunnel assault!"
{I find this a better translation for the situation}

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Probably out of my desperation to protect our old lives with each other,
I suddenly asked him one day...
{This is wrong grammar, btw. Now, you're saying that /I/ {Alibaba} asked Kassim one day due to his own desperation to protect their old lives}
{But the subject of the first sentence is Kassim. So re-edit these lines, or end line 193 with a period}
It was probably out of desperation to protect our current way of life.
That's why I approached him one day...

302
{if you need a tl, it's simply "Well..."}